Friday, July 30, 2010

Sentiments...

I saw her lying there, next to her friends. I was watching them from behind the glass, no one else was looking, everybody seemed to be focusing on other things. 

Some of her friends looked darker than she was, and they were sticking together, but she had her own gang.

I watched as she remained silent, she didn’t move, nor did her friends, they all seemed to enjoy the cool breeze, I stared for a while and then asked him:
“Who’s she?”
“She’s French”
“Yeah?”
“Yeah you wanna meet her?”
And without waiting for my answer he grabbed her, I reached my hand.

She was so soft, so attractive, her colors blended together so perfectly; cream and rich, velvety brown have never been so beautifully combined. I thought to myself “there has to be something wrong, she can’t be that perfect, maybe she would be different on the inside”, but deep down I knew, she was as sweet as one can be. 

I looked around and then decided to give it a shot, what do I have to lose anyway?

I pulled her closer to me, she wasn’t scared, she was millimeters away from my lips, and she did not blink.

I opened my mouth and took a bite; she was the most delicious chocolate cookie I have ever tasted, I bought her and some of her friends and went home.

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Franck Peters · 766 weeks ago

Was that as good for you as it was for me?
1 reply · active 765 weeks ago
Possibly better ;)
Man! Where did that come from? My mind went far, far away :)
Nice one!
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2 replies · active 765 weeks ago
Looks like all guys think the same way :)
Thanks!
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Franck Peters · 765 weeks ago

interesting observation Rand - thinking guys. That's new to me.
hehehe, you almost tricked us there, i hope that was some nice cookie :D
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1 reply · active 765 weeks ago
Oh it was nice alright ;)
haha, Rand, judging on the comments you already got from my good guys, you can tell what subjects occupy a man's mind! This I think justify why we men look like we can not multi-task!
2 replies · active 765 weeks ago
I think it's kinda sweet that all guys thought the same way hehe.
LOOL..good one Rand ! I almost believed it was a girl you talking about...
LOOL..good one Rand ! I almost believed it was a girl you talking about...
1 reply · active 766 weeks ago
;) you need some real-life romance guys.
oh rand! you had me going in a completely different direction, and then in yet another! ( :o ) loved it in the end.

(not your normal style, but i think you should run with it for awhile)
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1 reply · active 765 weeks ago
I like a change every once in a while :D
glad you liked it ;)
LOOOL
mesh 2aleleh 2ente ya benet ;)
nice one Rand :*
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1 reply · active 765 weeks ago
Lol shofti? Betla3 menni ;)
lolllll. good one :)
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